Thank you! I wasn't quite sure if I should switch the pov to yet another person, but I liked this version better than my first draft. Also, thank you again for the help, I realized later that I mangled quite a few of the names... *hangs head* I'm a bit rusty when it comes to writing fanfic so I'm glad it didn't turn out completely horrible :)

I'm currently checking over the story and trying to find all the remaining mistakes - my beta could only help with the first part, she's to busy with RL issues at the moment - and I'll be posting it to the McKay_Sheppard list with a link to this community. I hope that's OK, if not, just let me know and I delete the link.
Looking forward to the new challenge as well, it promises to be very interesting to see the episodes from the mensa-verse side.