I have no idea who wrote any of these, but I'm really enjoying this challenge. Very nice...I like the interactions between them, the slow build to John eventually exploding, and the glimpses of the rest of the mensau atlantis team.
I really love it. The appropriate amount of John angst - always nice - plus a bewildered Rodney, yay.
- When John pulled back he smiled at Rod fondly. “The great, unflappable Rod McKay. Mr. Cool. The biggest flirt in two galaxies. You are such a phony.” -
Yes, I can see it. Rod being the clueless one, despite the leather jacket and the cool talk in the 'other' Atlantis...
I love that you've given the other team members cameo-appearances, too. Ronon simply drinking the ceremonial cup dry, while John and Rodney squabble in the background, heh.
Okay, I have a soft spot for oblivious!Rodney - but oblivious!Rod is almost even more awesome! He's so slick on the surface, but beneath? The same old Rodney, and somehow the contrast really works for me. You bring it out really well!
Oooh. I really like poor, frustrated, repressed John. And their eventual coming together was so sweet. I mean, not an "aww..." kinda thing, but rich and well-earned. Yay!
Rod shrugged. “It’s only been a couple of days. You couldn’t have missed me that much already.”
He wasn’t looking, so a choked noise was the only warning he got. John lunged at Rod. Dropping his sticks, he gripped Rod’s shirt in both fists and shoved, their momentum carrying Rod backwards until his back hit the wall. “Fuck you!” John shouted. “Don’t you dare tell me how to feel!”
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Thank you so much for this !!!
- When John pulled back he smiled at Rod fondly. “The great, unflappable Rod McKay. Mr. Cool. The biggest flirt in two galaxies. You are such a phony.” -
Yes, I can see it. Rod being the clueless one, despite the leather jacket and the cool talk in the 'other' Atlantis...
I love that you've given the other team members cameo-appearances, too. Ronon simply drinking the ceremonial cup dry, while John and Rodney squabble in the background, heh.
Thank you again, I enjoyed this very much.
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He wasn’t looking, so a choked noise was the only warning he got. John lunged at Rod. Dropping his sticks, he gripped Rod’s shirt in both fists and shoved, their momentum carrying Rod backwards until his back hit the wall. “Fuck you!” John shouted. “Don’t you dare tell me how to feel!”
She shoots! She scores!
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