[identity profile] ceares.livejournal.com 2007-04-28 12:51 am (UTC)(link)
I have no idea who wrote any of these, but I'm really enjoying this challenge. Very nice...I like the interactions between them, the slow build to John eventually exploding, and the glimpses of the rest of the mensau atlantis team.

[identity profile] seekergeek.livejournal.com 2007-04-28 01:51 am (UTC)(link)
God, I love the Mensaverse. This was fabulous.

Thank you so much for this !!!

[identity profile] reulann.livejournal.com 2007-04-28 02:08 am (UTC)(link)
I really love it. The appropriate amount of John angst - always nice - plus a bewildered Rodney, yay.

- When John pulled back he smiled at Rod fondly. “The great, unflappable Rod McKay. Mr. Cool. The biggest flirt in two galaxies. You are such a phony.” -

Yes, I can see it. Rod being the clueless one, despite the leather jacket and the cool talk in the 'other' Atlantis...

I love that you've given the other team members cameo-appearances, too. Ronon simply drinking the ceremonial cup dry, while John and Rodney squabble in the background, heh.

Thank you again, I enjoyed this very much.

[identity profile] porntestpilot.livejournal.com 2007-04-28 02:14 am (UTC)(link)
I love you mensa_au John. <3 <3 <3

[identity profile] trinityofone.livejournal.com 2007-04-29 02:43 am (UTC)(link)
Oooh. I really like poor, frustrated, repressed John. And their eventual coming together was so sweet. I mean, not an "aww..." kinda thing, but rich and well-earned. Yay!
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[identity profile] machinistm.livejournal.com 2007-04-29 01:18 pm (UTC)(link)
Misunderstood!John was perfect, and this was an enjoyable read!

[identity profile] cesperanza.livejournal.com 2007-05-03 12:02 am (UTC)(link)
Rod shrugged. “It’s only been a couple of days. You couldn’t have missed me that much already.”

He wasn’t looking, so a choked noise was the only warning he got. John lunged at Rod. Dropping his sticks, he gripped Rod’s shirt in both fists and shoved, their momentum carrying Rod backwards until his back hit the wall. “Fuck you!” John shouted. “Don’t you dare tell me how to feel!”


She shoots! She scores!

[identity profile] kez193.livejournal.com 2008-03-23 01:43 am (UTC)(link)
Really sweet, always love the oblivious anybody, but particularly the oblivious Rodney. Excellent read.
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[identity profile] aqualegia.livejournal.com 2011-09-21 03:16 pm (UTC)(link)
Very enjoyable story. I love your Mensa!John and Rod.